Is this a decent start of a novel?
Question: I don't often write in third person, so sorry if its about crap. this introduces the main character, Ana (the child), who then narrates parts 2 and 3. Don't worry, Endra doesn't feature much.
The time of year was unseasonably warm for the city of Pallaidia. The
Answer: Just a word of advice- if you're wanting to catch your reader's attention, don't start off by talking about the weather. Mention it a bit later if you have to, but make sure that the beginning is interesting enough that people will want to keep reading. Long descriptions will
I'm sure I read this earlier on in the day.
Yes it's fine. Well done.
Yes it's fine. Well done.
